To prepare for job interview, i wrote some essay. i ask you to correct my grammer errors or the structure of

-> Preparing for Job Interview, I wrote some essay. I would like to ask you to correct my grammar errors or the structure of

contents.I'm going to get my writing checked one thing a day!

-> contents. I'm going to get my writing checked once a day!

Q: Have you had any conflicts with coworkers? How did you handle it, what did learn from that?

-> Q: Have you had any conflicts with coworkers? How did you handle it, what did you learn from that?

A: I have been in the customer service for 1 year. I stuck to the company's regulations well and had a positive

-> A: I have been in the customer service for 1 year. I stuck to the company's regulations well and had a positive

attitude all the time because i though the sincere effort is the most important thing doing something.

-> attitude all the time because I thought  sincere effort is the most important thing in doing something.

so, I could get good feedbacks from customers and I recommended to be a hall manager. From then, 4 team

-> so, I could get good feedbacks from customers and so that I will be recommended to be a hall manager. From then, 4 team

members became jealous of me,expressed their bad feelings to me all the time,i was distressed.

-> members became jealous of me, they expressed their bad feelings to me all the time,I  was distressed