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   제 목   I like animals. (diary)    상 태  
   작성자   adela17    등록일   2011-08-10
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I like animals.

-> I like animals.


I like puppies the most.

-> I like puppies the most.


Because puppy is very cute.

-> Because puppies are cute.


I want to get one but my mother doesn't like it.

-> I want to have one but my mother doesn't like it.


So I can't get a puppy.

-> So I can't have a puppy.


If I grow up I will buy a cute puppy.

-> If I grow up,  I will buy a cute puppy.


WOW!!!

-> WOW!!!


It will be fantastic!!!!

-> It will be fantastic!!!!

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