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   작성자   kst0205    등록일   2011-08-12
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My Best Friends.

-> My Best Friend,

I have 1 best friends.

-> I have one best friend.


First I will tell you the closest firend.His name is JuHun and I met him when I was

-> First, I will tell you about  the closest friend that I had. His name is JuHun and I met him when I was


in the 5th elementary school we was in the same class.When I was 5th grade, I played a lot with him and our house was near also. So I played a lot. Two

->  in the 5th elementary school we were in the same class.When I was in the 5th grade, I played a lot with him and our house was also near. So we played a lot. Two

years later, when I was middle shcool student, I was the same class with him. So we were became very friendly.

-> years later, when I was a middle school student, I was in  the same class with him. So we became best of friends.

And now on, I am middle school second grade, I'm not the same class with him, but I study in the same academy. So my best friend is JuHun.

-> And now, I 'm a  middle school second grade, I'm not in the  same class with him, but I studied  in the same academy. So my best friend is JuHun.

 

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