My younger brother's birthday was Sunday.

-> My younger brother's birthday was last Sunday.

So at Sunday me and my family went to Ashely.

-> So, my family and me went to Ashley's restaurant.

(Ashely is a restaurant.)

->(Ashely is a restaurant.)

At there we ate spaghetti,soup,snack,chocolate cake and toast.

-> At there we ate spaghetti,soup,snack,chocolate cake and toast.

It was very very delicious~~~!!!

-> It was very very delicious~~~!!!

So I like Ashely...^^

-> So I like Ashely's restaurant...^^

I want to go there with my family next time.^^

-> I want to go there with my family next time.^^

OH!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

-> OH!!!!!!!!!!!!

I forgot~!!!^^

-> I forgot~!!!^^

HAPPY BIRTHDAY~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-> HAPPY BIRTHDAY~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(My younger brother...^^)

->(My younger brother...^^)