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   작성자   kabpyo    등록일   2011-11-16
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Dear Amos,

-> Dear Amos,

Regarding the competitor’s information, we collected the data from the maintenance engineer in Samsung who is in charge of each tools.

-> Regarding the competitor’s information, we collected the data from the maintenance engineer in Samsung who is in charge of each tools.


So, those can be trusted. However, we will keep update If we can get additional information.

-> So, those can be trusted. However, we will keep update If we can get additional information.

Regarding the offer, As they have no practical experience with other competitors yet, it is not easy to get their expectation of price level.

-> Regarding the offer, As they have no practical experience with other competitors yet, it is not easy to get their expectation of price level.


So, we would like to have your formal offers not only for each quantity but also bundled case of both H1 & H2.

-> So, we would like to have your formal offers not only for each quantity but also bundled case of both H1 & H2.

We will have an additional discussion with Mr. K.S Kim (YE Manager) regarding the CoO issue again and let you know their answer.

-> We will have an additional discussion with Mr. K.S Kim (YE Manager) regarding the CoO issue again and we will let you know their answer.


He is in charge of the CoO & Service contract issues.

-> He is in charge of the CoO & Service contract issues.

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