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   작성자   kabpyo    등록일   2011-11-21
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Dear Alon,

-> Dear Alon,

I talked w/ U3 fab Sr. Manager Ahn and purchasing team .Ms Kim regarding our tools booked.(U2,U3,SAS..ETC)

->  I talked w/ U3 fab Sr. Manager Ahn and purchasing team .Ms Kim regarding our tools booked.(U2,U3,SAS..ETC)

I would like to say our serious status to get orders for several opportunities.

-> I would like to say our serious status to get orders for several opportunities.


Purchasing team asked JV to cancel booking(U3,U2 JVX6200) and to hold 7200 preparation.

-> Purchasing team asked JV to cancel booking(U3,U2 JVX6200) and to hold 7200 preparation.

They are saying the reasons for above.

-> They are saying the reasons for above.

1. Investment budget cut(Priority is required when they cut the budget)

-> . Investment budget cut(Priority is required when they cut the budget)


->.They have in trouble to secure this budget when priority needed.

-> They have in trouble to secure this budget when priority needed.


2. Running stability issues of JVX tools are too much burden them to buy additional tool

->  Running stability issues of JVX tools are too much burden them to buy additional tool


->. They moved some measurement step to MP new model from JVX6200 in
Line16(U3)

-> They moved some measurement step to MP new model from JVX6200 in
Line16(U3)

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