Vans! I wrote down our converstion and wrong sentances I can't hear or understand in this bulletin board. Please revise and amend them.

=> Vans! I wrote down our converstion and wrong sentences I can't hear or understand in this bulletin board. Please revise and amend them.

- Your picture has come out well

=> Your picture came out well.

- Do you take a picture by your digital camrera?

=> Do you take a picture by your digital camera?

- Koreans also have enjoyed SNS such as Facebook, Twitter.

=> Koreans also enjoyed SNS such as Facebook, Twitter.

- Before, it used to be likely to be happy wherever I go out. I mean there's many interests around me, just looking around, go driving outside.

=> Before,I used to be happy wherever I go out. I mean there's a lot  of interesting things  around me, just looked around, go driving outside.