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   작성자   ssreo33    등록일   2012-02-01
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hello
=> hello
how are you

=> how are you?

In here korea

=> In Korea

lot of snow fall in here!

=> there's a  heavy snowfall

and I'm so happy because

=> and I'm so happy because

I can make the snowman!

=> I can make a snowman

and today we play the snow ball fight!

=> and today we  played snowfighting

and I'm hit my leg and also I hit my face!

but it's okay because I am the IMMORTAL MAN

=> but it's okay because I am the IMMORTAL MAN

ha ha sorry

=> ha ha sorry

and tomorrow I'm gonna make snow base!

=> and tomorrow I'm gonna make snow base!

have a g'day everyone!

=. have a good day everyone!

 
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