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   작성자   ssreo33    등록일   2012-02-10
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hello? how are you?

-> Hello ? How are you?

befor I just play with my lego!

-> Just before you call me I played with my lego.

I realy like lego!

-> I really like Lego!

apparently lego is just kid TOY

-> Apparently, Lego toys is just for kids.

but it's not

-> But it's not

the lego is all can play it~!

-> Lego is for all kinds of age . Everybody can play lego.

lego is good! and we play with lego, we can have concentrate!

-> Lego is good! and we can play with lego but we need concentration.

goodbye!

-> Goodbye!

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