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   작성자   ssreo33    등록일   2012-02-20
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today I hang out with my friend

-> Today I hang out with my friend.

unfortunatly I have a cold and I just come back eirly

-> Unfortunately I have a cold and I just come back earlier

I don't like cold

-> I don't like cold

I allways avoiding the cold

-. I'm always avoiding to catch a cold

but in winter and summer I allmost have a cold

-> But during winter and summer I almost have colds

in this winter I don't have a cold and I consider that I am helthy now

-> This winter I don't have a cold and I think that I'm healthy now.

but it was backfired I have a COLD

-> But It was backfired and I got a cold.

go away!!! cold!!!

-> Go away!!!! cold!!!!

I'm desire that I allways helthy

-> I want that I will be always heatlhy

bye

-> bye

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