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   제 목   First class.    상 태  
   작성자   hyunmoo777    등록일   2012-03-19
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I had a class for the first time. But thers was something wrong with the class time. The teacher who are supposed to teach me called at 10 A.M. There's gotta be something wrong with it. Anyway, my class got started at 9:00 P.M. But the connection with teacher was a bit bad. I couldn't exactly catch what she was saying. I would just like to talk with her. I don't know why it was bad. what is the matter with my phone? By the way, It doesn't matter as long as the connection could be better, Haha. She was very kind and active. Also she was the same age with me. I'm expecting with her class, So we're even close. Anyway, Although the connection was really bad, The time with teacher was so fast. I guess the time would be even faster if the connection become too clear.

I had a class for the first time. But thers was something wrong with the class time.

-> I had a class for the first time, but there was something wrong with the class time.

The teacher who are supposed to teach me called at 10 A.M.

-> The teacher who was supposed to teach me called at 10 A.M.

Anyway, my class got started at 9:00 P.M. But the connection with teacher was a bit bad.

-> Anyway, my class got started at 9:00 P.M. but the connection with teacher was a bit bad.

what is the matter with my phone?

-> What is the matter with my phone?

By the way, It doesn't matter as long as the connection could be better, Haha.

-> By the way, it doesn't matter as long as the connection could be better (haha).

I'm expecting with her class, So we're even close.

-> I'm expecting with her class, so we're even close.

Anyway, Although the connection was really bad, The time with teacher was so fast.

-> Anyway, although the connection was really bad, the time with teacher was so fast.



 

 

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