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   작성자   hyunmoo777    등록일   2012-03-21
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I have an idea for our class.

=> I have an idea for our class.


The book, that was gave to me, is really easy.

=>The book that was given to me is really easy.


Moreover, as a result of watching all the pages of book, this book was not interesting to me.

=> Moreover, as a result of watching all the pages of the book, I found out that it was not interesting. .


So, why don't we have the class with an article or good topic? Haa

=> So, why don't we have  an article or good topic in our class? Haa


Today, the connection was better than yesterday. Just, I could still hear your loud breathing out of your mouth and nose. Haha

=> Today, the connection was better than yesterday. Just, I could still hear your loud breathing out of your mouth and nose. Haha

As let me see, you're always breathing hard. :)

=> As I observed you had the hard time breathing.


are you that excited ? because you're talking with me? Haha Never mind, just kidding.

=> Are you that excited? And beacuse you are talking with me? Haha never mind, I am just kidding.


Have a nice day :)

=>Have a nice day :)

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