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   작성자   hyunmoo777    등록일   2012-03-30
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When i was seated at my tiny chair, all of a sudden, i would like to eat icecream. Needless to say, i went out to buy it. So, i bought a size of 750ml. HaHa. and then i had all of it. Icecream is really soft and melts in my mouth. Unfortunately, I have had weak stomach since i was 15. Becasue i really ate a lot like a pig eagaring to have something to eat. haha Anyway, i'm now expecting that i will have any diarrhea with a pain i know well. haha

When i was seated at my tiny chair, all of a sudden, i would like to eat icecream.
-> When I was seated at my tiny chair, all of a sudden, I would like to eat icecream.
 

So, i bought a size of 750ml. HaHa.and then i had all of it. Icecream is really soft and melts in my mouth.
 

->  So, I bought a size of 750ml. Haha. And then I had all of it. Icecream is really soft and melts in my mouth.

Unfortunately, I have had weak stomach since i was 15. Becasue i really ate a lot like a pig eagaring to have something to eat. haha

 -> Unfortunately, I have had weak stomach since I was 15. Becasue I really ate a lot like a pig eagaring to have something to eat. Haha.

Anyway, i'm now expecting that i will have any diarrhea with a pain i know well. haha

->  Anyway, I'm now expecting that I will have any diarrhea with a pain i know well. Haha.

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