I leaved home because I got a new job.

-->I left at home because I have got a new job.

 And I stay at domitory now.

-->And I am staying in the dormitory now.

I am going to home every saterdaynight.

-->I go home every Saturday night.

I want to see my family, especialy my daughter.

--> I want to see my family  especially my daughter.

Lovely daughter, see you on weekend!

-->Lovely daughter, see you on the weekend!