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   작성자   cla12    등록일   2012-04-18
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yesterday i was very tired
-> Yesterday I was very tired.

i was going a school riding a bicycle
-> Iwent to school by riding a bicycle.
[similar] I rode a bicycle in going to school.

Unfortunately suddenly my bicycle's front tire was broken
-> Unfortunately my bicycle’s front tire was suddenly broken.

so i was confusing
-> So I was confused.

luckily i arrived the school at time
-> Luckily I arrived in school on time.

when i finished the school i went bike center to fix my bike
-> When I’m finished in school I went to the bike center to fix my bike.
 
but bike center is so far and the whether is so hot
-> But the bike center was so far and the weather was so hot.

it was terrible yesterday
-> Yesterday was a terrible day.
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