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   작성자   erica2270    등록일   2012-07-24
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My grandmother came home. She gave me a corn. It was so soft. So my teeth didn't fell out. I said I wanted to

-> My grandmother came home. She gave me a corn. It was so soft. So my teeth didn't fell out. I said I wanted to

eat more. My grandmother cleaned the house but got stung by a bee. I felt sad. But my father didn't allow me to

-> eat more. My grandmother cleaned the house but got stung by a bee. I felt sad. But my father didn't allow me to

watch the bee. So I was angry.

->watch the bee. So I was angry.

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