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   제 목   Door breakdown    상 태  
   작성자   mysong    등록일   2012-07-24
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Last Saturday, my fornt door was broken. I think that it has been corrosion caused by the differnence height of the passage. I contacted management office and asked them to fix it ASAP.

 

Last Saturday, the front door of my house was broken.I thought that it was because of the corrosion brought by the difference height of the passage.I contacted the management's office right away and asked them to fix it ASAP.

 

hi ms. pearl,

 

I was just correcting the composition generally and made some revisions~

may you be ignited to write some more

 

~jenn~

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