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   작성자   ssonism    등록일   2012-10-14
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Thank you for giving me a chance to introduce myself. My name is sonjihye. I want to describe myself as a great team player. I love

-> Thank you for giving me a chance to introduce myself. My name is Sonjihye. I want to describe myself as a great team player. I love

doing something in a team. So my school life is full of club activities and team playing such as volunteering, science, dancing and

-> doing something in a team. So my school life is full of club activities and team playing such as volunteering, science, dancing and

making car club. Though these activities my interpersonal skills improved and I learned the importance of harmony and cooperation

-> making car club. Though these activities helps my interpersonal skills to improved and I also learned the importance of harmony and cooperation

with others.

-> with others.

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