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   작성자   khkimtwo    등록일   2013-02-18
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If someone had a terminal disease and his days were numbered, he should know the truth as soon as possible. If he

 =>If someone had a terminal disease and his days were numbered, he should know the truth as soon as possible. If he

is not ready to accept it, his situation may go from bad to worse. But others around him should help him to overcome

=>is not ready to accept it, his situation may go from bad to worse. But others around him should help him to overcome

and let him prepare for his final day. I think it's more terrible he meet his death without any preparation. It seems to be

=>and let him prepare for his final day. I think it's more terrible for someone to die without preparation. It seems to be

great if we are able to prepare for our final day when we get old.

=>great if we are able to prepare for our final day when we get old.

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