Wrong education system leads them in a wrong way and also society that requires license like diploma takes a share in it.

=>Wrong education system leads them in a wrong way and also society that requires license like diploma takes a share in it.

I think education has to be able to draw out the best that is in the students. In order to do like this, students must

=>I think education has to be able to draw out the best that is in the students. In order to do like this, students must

be raised through the education that is divided into three parts, moral, intellectual and physical one(including art

=>be raised through the education that is divided into three parts, moral, intellectual and physical one(including art

and music). One sided education, especially which(that) emphasizes intellectual part is dangerous.

=>and music). One sided education, especially which(that) emphasizes intellectual part is dangerous.