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1pg. There was a tree under a blue sky There was a man in a vast field. 2pg.In a small whisper of green leaves and sunshine outing revel in the joy of life seems. Beautiful in the world receive many blessings see off the first step.

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 1pg. There was a tree under a blue sky. There was a man in a vast field.

2pg.  In a small whisper of green leaves and sunshine outing revel in the joy of life seems beautiful. In this world, we receive many blessings. See off the first step.

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