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   작성자   sophie04kim    등록일   2016-05-04
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Hi! My name is Sophie...and today I'll tell you about I-Quarium in Pangyo, Seoul. So this paragraph is related with my experience in Seoul. It starts now! I-Quarium's biggest difference compared with other aquarium is...... I-Quarium doesn't have any fishes. Instead of it, they use digital I-Phone application. I-Quarium's program is divided to six spaces, and we can experience different kinds of things in each spaces. We always use I-Phone app and it's always same in all spaces. In the last space, we can confirm our scores and ranking while we challenged in each spaces. Well, I was always in second, so I was really upset when I left the aquarium. I hope you enjoyed, and thank you for reading♡

 

Hi! My name is Sophie. Today, I'll tell about I-Quarium in Pangyo, Seoul. However, this is based with my experience in Seoul. I-Quarium biggest difference compared with other aquariums is, it doesn't have any fishes instead, it used digital I-Phone application. I-Quarium program is divided into six spaces. Furthermore, we can experience different kinds of things in each spaces. We always used I-Phone app in all spaces. In the last space, we can confirm our scores and ranking while we challenged in each spaces. Indeed, I was always in the second place, so I was really upset when I left the aquarium. I hope you enjoyed. Thank you for reading!

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