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   제 목   I need correct my introduction.    상 태  
   작성자   leedo1984    등록일   2010-05-11
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My name is castiel. I'm 27 years old.

-> My name is Castiel. I'm 27 years old.

I'm a last year student at Seoul national university of technology where i'm taking up mechanical engineering.

-> This is my last year as a student at Seoul National University of Technology, Where I'm taking up Mechanical Engineering.

At present, I live with my mother who is housewife.

-> At present, I live with my mother, she is a housewife.

My father was dead when i was 23.

-> My father died when I was 23.

And my sister got married 3 years ago. So. i just live with my mother.

->And my sister got married 3 years ago.  So , I live with my mother.

I have some hobby.

-> My hobbies are

I like to enjoy snow board in winter, I like to enjoy scuba diving in summer.

-> I like snow boarding in winter, and I enjoyed scuba diving in summer.


Common days, I like to watch movies or dramas.

-> Common days, I like to watch movies or dramas.



And I'm little shy person, but I'm friendly person. It's not match, but it's me.

-> I'm a shy person, but I'm friendly. It doesn't   match but it's still me.

So, if i want to play game or drink, I just call my friends not strangers.

-> So, if I want to play a game or drink, I just call my friends not other people .

I can't flirt with strangers. It's too difficult to say something to them.

-> I can't flirt with other people because it's too difficult  to have conversation with them.

Couse I'm shy.

-> Because I'm shy.

i just wanna do well this test.

-> I just wanna do well in this test.

Thank you!!

-> Thank you!!

   이전글 would you check my expressions
   다음글 I was very speechless