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   작성자   ghk0304    등록일   2010-05-11
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HI?? Today I will tell u about friends.

-> HI?? Today I will tell you about friends.


Do u like one best friend or many friend but no best friend.

-> Do you like one best friend or many friends but no best friend.


I think ,,, one best friend is better.

-> I think,,, one best friend is better.


Because,,, when there is no best friend,,, If I have a problem,,,

-> Because ,,, when there is no best friend,,, Then if I  have problem,,


I can't tell to someone else.

-> I can't tell to someone else.


So,,, I like one best friend then many friend but no best friend.

-> So,, I like only one best friend than many friends but no best friend.


when I have best friend,,,, I can tell everything that I what to tell someone.

-> When I have best friend ,, I can tell everything that I want to tell to someone.


I also have best friend.

-> I have best friend.


And I have many friends too.

-> And I have many friends too.


I think best friend and many friend but no best friend both are good.

-> I think best frtiend and having many friends too but no best friend both are good.


I will make more friend and more best friend.xD

-> I will make more friends and more best friend.xD


How about u??

-> How about u??


I think its good to make more best friend and friends.

-> I think it's good to make more best friend and friends.


BYE~~^^

-> BYE ~~^^

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