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   작성자   blue92    등록일   2010-12-20
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Usually I drink coffee after a meal beacause I'm sleepy after a meal And I drink coffee not to take a nap. 15. I drink one or two coups of coffee a day.

->Usually I drink coffee after a meal beacause I'm sleepy after it. And I drink coffee not to take a nap. 15. I drink one or two cups of coffee a day.

16.I believe that balanced meals is very important. to Eat balanced meals, to get plenty of sleep, and to do regular exercise are important factors to maintain the health.

->16.I believe that balanced meals is very important. To eat balanced meals, to get plenty of sleep, and to do regular exercise are important factors to maintain health.

18. I'm worried about pesticides when I eat fruit. so I wash the fruit clean. Also I like pesticide-free produce. 19. I don't think I'm removing all the pesticide on the fruit when I wash it. so I usually used to peel apples. .

->18. I'm worried about pesticides when I eat fruit so I wash the fruit clean. Also, I like pesticide-free products. 19. I don't think I'm removing all the pesticide on the fruit when I wash it. so I usually used to peel apples. .

   이전글 Thanks for correctting my sentences.
   다음글 fix my sentences, please