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   작성자   tldms9997    등록일   2010-05-28
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Today I was practice fire-fighting procedures .

-> Today I practiced fire-fighting procedures.


Before the practice fire-fighting procedures, I was scared to death.

-> Before the practice of fire- fighting procedures. I was scared to death.
 


Fire fighter are coming our school, extinguish a fire with a fire hose.

-> A group of fire fighter are coming to our school, extinguish a fire with a fire hose.


It was very exciting.

-> It was very exciting.



Actually, my friend (boys) is more afraid than me...

-> Actually, my friends  (boys)are more afraid than me.....




Coward....HAHA

-> Coward..... HAHA

   이전글 with my friends...
   다음글 oh my god