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   제 목   I'm turn black and blue all over    상 태  
   작성자   tldms9997    등록일   2010-05-31
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I'm turn black and blue all over.

 

-> I turned  black and blue all over.



Because, I practiced in the ice rink yesterday, I fell down the ice.

-> Because, I practiced in the ice rink yesterday, I fell down the ice.



I was painful that time.

-> It was painful that time.

Nay more, receive several wounds all over the place (my body)

-> Nay more, I receive several wounds all over the place ( my body)

I'm be careful, next time.

-> I will be careful, next time.

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