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   작성자   tldms9997    등록일   2010-06-03
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Today, I am very tired. Because I played with my friends for 2 hours.
-> Today I am very tired because I played with my friends for 2 hours.
I am not have very special things.
-> I don't have very special things
In school, and in academy....with my friends.
-> In school, and in academy .... with my friends.
But, the day after tomorrow I will go Seoul (advancement evaluation of figure.)
-> But the day after tomorrow I will go to Seoul ( advancement evaluation of figure )
 

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