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   작성자   blue92    등록일   2011-03-14
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3.If man is wise , frist he will listen carefully to woman's word.

->3.If man is wise , frist he will listen carefully to woman's words.

 

 

He must be know actually how to win women and he know the way to get woman's heart.

->He must actually know how to win women and know the ways to get  a woman's heart.

 

 

4. I think men are almost leading figures and their self-respect is very strong. wo they hate to be ordered and to be interfered in every respect.

-> 4. I think men are almost leading figures and their self-respect is very strong, they hate to be ordered and to be interfered in every respect.

 

 

5. Men would offer their xeat to women.

 ->5. Men should offer their seats to women.

 

 

If he has to stand all the way to his destination he will be exhausted totally.

->If he has to stand all the way to his destination, he will be totally exhausted .

 

 

So we, women have to think they are just same human.

->So, we, women have to think they are just same human.

 

 

 

6. Actually women are apt to weak men's compliment.

->6. Actually women are apt to weak men's compliment.

 

 

Especally about beauty. But I think that women have to be careful not to lose thier obectivity.

->Especally about beauty. But I think that women have to be careful not to lose thier obectivity.

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