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   작성자   blue92    등록일   2011-03-15
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7I think if a woman love a man sincerely she will love him from bottom to top of her heart.

-> I think if a woman loves a man sincerely, she will loves him from the bottom to top of her heart.

8.Generalyy men would want women's mistery. A misterious woman has captured the man's heart.

-> Generally, men want women's mistery. A misterious woman have captured the man's heart.


9. Man are different in many respect. They have a different point of vew comparing to women.

-> Men are different in many respects. They have a different point of view comparing to women.


sometimes they would forget tings about thier marriage.

-> Sometimes they forget things about their marriage.


But they have to try to remember them for their wives's happiness.

-> But they have to try to remember them for their wive's happiness.


10. I agree in part. A woman's ideal man is differedt according to each woman.

-> I agree in that part. A woman's ideal man is different, according to each woman.


In my case though he is not rich he always cherish me beyond compare

-> In my case, though he is not rich, he always cherish me beyond compare.


He is worth to be loved to me.

-> He is worthy to be loved by me.


-Though we keep our health to stay good gene's factor is fatal to our helath.

->We keep our health to stay good. Gene's factor is fatal to our health.


However we should try to stay fit continously for happy living.

-> However, we should try to stay fit continously for a happy living.

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