My career explaination is as below. The reason for majoring in office automation is because I wanted to an extensive Knowledge in information system. I got the job in Graudate school of Int’l Studies (GSIS) after I graduated from Baewha women’s college. I was in charge of Dan’s Secretary, student documentation and manager of computer lab. GSIS Dean was foreigner. I was grateful for the experience to work with an American boss. GSIS is a graduate school with gives all the lectures in English. So all the staff had to speak English. I appreciate the experience I had at the Int’l environment. During my time working at GSIS I felt that I should pursue my studies in computer science more in depth. I decided to transfer to another University which had a better computer science program.

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My career explanation is as below.

The reason for majoring in Office Automation is because I wanted to have an extensive knowledge about information system. I got the job in Graudate school of Int’l Studies (GSIS) after I graduated from Baewha Women’s College. I was in charge of Dan’s Secretary, student documentation and manager of computer lab. GSIS Dean was a foreigner. I was grateful for the experience to work with an American boss. GSIS is a graduate school with gives all the lectures in English. So all the staff had to speak English. I appreciate the experience I had at the Int’l environment. During my time working at GSIS I felt that I should pursue my studies in computer science more in depth. I decided to transfer to another University which had a better computer science program.

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The reason that I majored in Office Automation is that I wanted to have an extensive knowledge concerning information system. I got a job in the Graduate School of Int’l Studies (GSIS) after I finished my major at Baewa Women's College. I was the secretary of Dean, who is in charge of the student documentation and the manager of the computer lab. The GSIS's dean was a foreigner. I was grateful for having the experience to work with an American boss. GSIS is a graduate school which gives all the lectures in English. So, all the staffs had to speak English. I appreciate the experience I had at an Int'l environment. During my time working at GSIS, I felt that I should pursue my studies in Computer Science in depth.  I decided to transfer to another University which has a better computer science program.