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   작성자   blue92    등록일   2011-04-07
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-There are not good to eat much to sleep well. But I thihk as I had a drink of wine I felt better talking with my friend. It will be better for good health. -In mordern society there are something of foodie's paradise. High calories are present throghout many foods for example fried greasy food, takeout foods, fastfoods. And light work tend to add to time to have food. -Atter this class I have to clean my house. next I'm going to plan what to do. I hope you'll be careful to manage it. -He had bad cold. He had high fever all night long. So we went the hospital. He get seen he got his medicine. He took a rest all day long. wo he was getting better.

 

It is not good to eat a lot before going to bed. But I think if I had a drink of wine I felt better talking with my friend. It will be better for good health. -In mordern society there are something of foodie's paradise. High calories are present throughout many foods for example fried greasy food, takeout foods, fastfoods. And light work tend to add to time to have food. -Atter this class I have to clean my house. Next I'm going to plan on what to do next. I hope you'll be careful to manage it. -He had a bad cold. He had high fever all night long. So we went  to the hospital. He get seems to get  his medicine. He took a rest all day long. So he was getting better.

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