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   작성자   dongeen    등록일   2011-04-11
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My dreams

 I have two kinds of dreams.

The first thing is becoming something.

-> My first dreams is to become something.

And the second thing is want to do something.

-> And the second dream is that I want to do something.

I want to be a very popular politician.

-> I want to become a popular politician.

Because I like to be a leader.

-> Because I want to be a leader.

I don't know why I like to be a politician.

But I don't like to be a president. because I scare about a sense of responability.

-> But I don't like to be a president because Im scared when it comes to responsibility.

And I want to live in a small island with my family.

And I want to make my big castle.

-> And I want to have a big castle.

Then I want to work farming and fishing.I don,t want to use money.

-> Then I want to be a farmer and a fisherman. I don't have to use money.

My first and second dream is very diffrent...

-> My first and second dreams is quite different.

I will pratice for my dreams!!!!

-> I will work hard for my dreams!!!!

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