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   작성자   tldms9997    등록일   2010-06-29
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Again, I study hard ...Because the test.

-> Again, I studied hard.... Because the test

Test is terrible...

-> Test is terrible....

So I can't write diary. Because this.

-> So I can't write my diary. Because of  this.

I hope this time , I have great score

-> I hope this time , I will have high score .

 

 
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